rate_review Reviews

Wow!!! Cool story. Could use a beta, you have a few tiny errors (but nothing that detracts from the story).
I really hope you write a follow up, even if it's only a one shot to this.

This story was great, and I loved how you wrote the scenes between Spidey and She-Hulk. I can only imagine how the kid will end up, and I honeslty think that hadn't Peter married MJ Jen Walters would've been a fine choice....of course with the recent retcon I suppose it doesn't matter so much either way.
Very excited to see the continuation to this, maybe the two coming back together as Jen tries to raise their child? Or you could definitely take advantage of the marriage removal retcon. In any case, I'd love to see more to this story.

While I do want to give you a review for a nicely written up fic..

Hee hee. Spidey did She-Hulk.

You know, what I dont understand is, despite the fact that Spider-man (comics universe) has been married for quite some time, no one has bothered doing the taboo thing and have him defile his marriage with MJ. Its entireally naughty in a bad way. Or good.

Its all on perspective.

Great two chapters!

Thanks all, for the kind words. I am planning on following this up, just not sure where I'm going with it. Any suggesstions?

“Man, we ain’t ever gonna get no hero pussy,” a bald man said.

“We better. I don’t care how many gizmos he got.” A black man cracked his knuckles.

“Pay’s good. He never promised us no spandex booty.”

“This guy fights the Avengers, right?”

“Nah, the FF. You know, that team with the MILF. She’s on TV all the time.”

“Now that’s something I’d like to tap.”

All that made me laugh pretty hard. The Mad Thinker's package was an icky image, but again, I laughed. Great dialogue in this story. If you don't continue it, you should write another one like it.

Very well done. I hope to see more from you.

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