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for The Ultimate Goodbye

by marvelmaster616

person TVO
schedule June 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow slickboy, that was awesome. Very happy to see you are doing Peter Parker/MJ now, and this one was great. As was the other one.

I enjoyed the sentiment. That they were just having a goodbye bout of lovemaking but they would remain together. They weren't splitting things off because they had already done that before but they kept gravitating back to each other. I think this only reflects what Marvel Comics editors seem to hate: Mary Jane and Peter were meant to be together.