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for To Break a Hero

by Jeshuea

person K.Blood
schedule November 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another good chapter, although the ending seemed rushed. One moment Roy is being threatened by Daniel to hand Dick over, then the next he's being dragged through the floor by the guy. The scenes all happened too fast (then again, maybe that's what you were going for?).

Also, you say that the next chapter is to be the last. I really don't know if this story can be tied up in a single chapter, but I will keep faith that you can do it. ^_^

Just don't feel like you have to speed through everything. Please take your time with the details and writing. A good story is worth waiting for (and this is a VERY good story).
person K.Blood
schedule September 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Poor, BB. You just have to feel bad for a sobbing little mouse.
However, the dildo idea was very creative and--on a perverted level--very appropriate. Nice work with chapter four. I can't wait to see how this new situation for Dick is going to workout.
person Anon
schedule July 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That was good. I hope you update soon.
person K.Blood
schedule July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm starting to fine this Daniel guy very...interesting, in a twisted kind of way.

Poor Robin, though. So who's next?
This whole story is very engaging (and so well written). Please don't take too long to update.
person K.Blood
schedule July 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hope that you continue with this.
It's a really great story and I just have to know how Dick is going to get through it all.
schedule July 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is really good -- you've got me on edge! O_O This should be posted on FF -- they need more Batman/Nightwing fics.

Excellent job! I'll just sit here and wait for the next update. ^^
schedule June 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
=o This is amazing! Please update soon! 9.9