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Wow...the end left me breathless, yet I expected him to do something horrible to her. He had killed her the moment he told her the truth, the knife was probably the only merciful thing he did for her. Jeez...not to get all psychological on you, but DAMN, I saw myself in that. Not necessarily in the things she did, but how she made the Joker her all, only for him to use it against her and really break her heart. Too many chicks in relationships do that...they lose what shred of themselves they had to become what they think the other person wants. And when it blows up in their faces, what are they left with? Blood and rose petals on white sheets. Poignant. I hope you decide to write more, not only in this genre, but in others because you, my desired one, have talent.

*evil smile*

I am usually very, very, VERY (I cannot emphasize this enough) against pairing existing characters with OCs, because they're just... poorly written. There's no reason for them. It's the author living out his or her own will through an OC--it just isn't appealing to me, therefore I greatly dislike stories featuring Character/OC.

USUALLY.

This is an enormous exception! I... love Desiree. More importantly, what she's BECOMING under the Joker's influence. She's the perfect outlet to show off just how sadistic and insane he is. Yet at the same time... how SANE he is. I love love LOVED Joker's speech on God and humans and chaos. It's so perfect and eerie, because it makes so much SENSE.

Ahhhh, I can't tell you how much I love this story. This is fantastic work! I can see a relationship developing between them--as odd as it may be. It'll be interesting to see what happens next!

I'm loving this! ♥

*gasp* at the end of ch12! The bastard...
... but I still love him. Hah.
Your Joker is brilliantly sadistic and totally mad. Love this fic to pieces.
More soon plesh!

I still really like the psychological stuff, but the sex stuff seems to have trotted into the mundane. You really think Joker would be into such boring and staid BDSM practices like 'Master' and riding crops? I are sad. :(

The line about a woman's pussy being so tight before she dies was hot though. More in that direction, less of the stuff you'd find in any fetish club being bandied by any poser with a pair of leather trousers on.

I have high hopes because you've got the psychology on the nail. I only wish it was the comics Joker you were writing about.

*blinks* That... was intense. Fantastic!

I think you captured the Joker perfectly here. This was very well written!

Excellent! Keep it up.

Can't wait to see what she decides! This is a really intriguing story.. I love Desiree's perspective and the Joker is HOT. :)

Interesting. I can't wait to see how this one turns out! :)