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for Slave to Your Organics

by DancingMouse

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schedule August 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This startled me. At first I wasn;t quite sure what all I was reading, and then it hit me. I went into a mild shock as I kep reading, oddly entranced by all that was happeneing. I felt sorry for Johnny in the end, but otherside this was very well done.
schedule June 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was amazing. Very in character and well thought out. 10/10