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October 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I Love this series. I think I honestly take more enjoyment from the plot and charachter developments here than I do out the comics.
There are new subtleties to the turtles that can only come from growing up. They haven't simply been aged and thrown into new circumstances. They bring with them new memories and character flaws that really test the bond between character and reader..
Super stoked to see what comes next. Please, for the love of all that's Holy, don't stop writing!
There are new subtleties to the turtles that can only come from growing up. They haven't simply been aged and thrown into new circumstances. They bring with them new memories and character flaws that really test the bond between character and reader..
Super stoked to see what comes next. Please, for the love of all that's Holy, don't stop writing!
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October 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Glad u updated I love this story
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October 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Want more soon
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September 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I love this girl, end of story.
It would be a very interesting sight to see how the others take her reaction in knowing the truth. And yea, even though Leo is the leader, he isn't perfect. Kudos on writing him realizing that (gets a little old reading about him striving to be the perfect leader and son that everyone expects him to be).
On a lighter note; Mikey's reaction was brilliant. I could not stop laughing and only wish I were somehow able to physically witness his freaking out and veins popping as he yelled his string of curses in the phone. Even though he's beyond pissed off, it's amusing as hell.
Love the updates (if it weren't obvious already)! Definitely worth the wait.
Can't wait to see what else you have in store for the family!
-Jenny
P.S. You're quite welcome, and you more than deserve the reviews/readers. I hope you never underestimate yourself, because you know how to weave and deliver a good story.
It would be a very interesting sight to see how the others take her reaction in knowing the truth. And yea, even though Leo is the leader, he isn't perfect. Kudos on writing him realizing that (gets a little old reading about him striving to be the perfect leader and son that everyone expects him to be).
On a lighter note; Mikey's reaction was brilliant. I could not stop laughing and only wish I were somehow able to physically witness his freaking out and veins popping as he yelled his string of curses in the phone. Even though he's beyond pissed off, it's amusing as hell.
Love the updates (if it weren't obvious already)! Definitely worth the wait.
Can't wait to see what else you have in store for the family!
-Jenny
P.S. You're quite welcome, and you more than deserve the reviews/readers. I hope you never underestimate yourself, because you know how to weave and deliver a good story.
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September 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Yay, Leo needs some love. Glad to see you're continuing this story. I really enjoy reading it.
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September 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Hey, Eva!
I love your turlte-writing so much.. I never go to sleep without reading some.. ha ha ha.. for better dreams <3
I've started reading "Perseverance" back in the day. Lately was feeling nostalgic and desided to come back an check it out again.. only to discover the sequel ^_^
Made my day (or should I say - my nights!).
Anyway, just wanted to show you my appreciation and tell you how much I enjoy your writing! You're super awesome... Turtle-love!!!
P.S: Keep going... and neve-ever stop! (How am I supposed to have any good dreams without some TMNT action Eva-style?!?!?)
I love your turlte-writing so much.. I never go to sleep without reading some.. ha ha ha.. for better dreams <3
I've started reading "Perseverance" back in the day. Lately was feeling nostalgic and desided to come back an check it out again.. only to discover the sequel ^_^
Made my day (or should I say - my nights!).
Anyway, just wanted to show you my appreciation and tell you how much I enjoy your writing! You're super awesome... Turtle-love!!!
P.S: Keep going... and neve-ever stop! (How am I supposed to have any good dreams without some TMNT action Eva-style?!?!?)
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August 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Hi there,
I've actually finished reading your story a few days ago and started reading it again. I have to say that this would have to be my favorite story out of all the archs I've read on this site; the story+characterization flow very well, and I am glad you decided to go a different route like you had mentioned in one of the chapters. Breaks my heart the brothers had to witness such drama, though the character build up was worth it. I very much enjoy he relationship you have with April & Yoshi, ever since I was a kid that always made sense to me haha. I will definitely be following up with this and see where it leads.
On a completely random note (okay, two): 1) You've inspired me to flesh out my own TMNT story ideas and I hope to get them written at a decent time 2) I normally love Raphael, and even though your characterization and interractions of him you had written has me smitten for him all over again, you've successfuly had me falling for Mikey (I didn't realize it until that fateful chapter w/Lisa, that was hard for me read cause I kept seeing red). So congradulations on accomplishing a feat no one else had in the past.
Good luck with your next chapters and I hope they are fun to write as I'm sure they will be to read :)
I've actually finished reading your story a few days ago and started reading it again. I have to say that this would have to be my favorite story out of all the archs I've read on this site; the story+characterization flow very well, and I am glad you decided to go a different route like you had mentioned in one of the chapters. Breaks my heart the brothers had to witness such drama, though the character build up was worth it. I very much enjoy he relationship you have with April & Yoshi, ever since I was a kid that always made sense to me haha. I will definitely be following up with this and see where it leads.
On a completely random note (okay, two): 1) You've inspired me to flesh out my own TMNT story ideas and I hope to get them written at a decent time 2) I normally love Raphael, and even though your characterization and interractions of him you had written has me smitten for him all over again, you've successfuly had me falling for Mikey (I didn't realize it until that fateful chapter w/Lisa, that was hard for me read cause I kept seeing red). So congradulations on accomplishing a feat no one else had in the past.
Good luck with your next chapters and I hope they are fun to write as I'm sure they will be to read :)
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August 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying your stories. I don't know if it was you are not but someone tried to put your story on Fanfiction.net I hope your stories continue more. I would like to see more on Leo
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August 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wandered back to this site and was pleasantly surprised to that this story had been updated. I thought maybe you had given up on it. I am once again thoroughly enjoying this story and will be looking forward to reading more as you post future chapters. Great job with this!
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July 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Lol, I was waiting for steamy "pregnant" scenes to happen! I think a lot of writers are afraid to go into that kind of territoy, but you managed to make a good one and I applaud you for it. Well written, can't wait for more story!