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December 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
oh please don't let estrella be raph's love interest, yuck
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November 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You have returned! Thank you for continuing this story you just made my holiday season heh :) I liked your new chapters Leonardo and Lisa make such a sweet couple and it was nice to finally see them semi hook up. I liked how you brought in the mother in law and Mikey's 15 minute break joke made me laugh, you have a good sense of humor.
Though I'm almost dreading when the mother in law finds out that Donatello is a mutant and that her grand-kids will be also. I just know she will try something evil heh.
Though I'm almost dreading when the mother in law finds out that Donatello is a mutant and that her grand-kids will be also. I just know she will try something evil heh.
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August 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I loved your last story and I have to say I really love your new one to. You had me going there with Charlate on that roof heh. Why have yo stopped writing this?! i need to find out what happens next! I would love more on Raphael and Estrella it seems to me that they would both make a fun and interesting couple. Never knew Raphael spoke Spanish I completely lol'd at that part! It makes sence to me that he would given his time is mostly spent out on the streets helping people like her.
I think that you did the April-Splinter relationship very well I knew it was coming ;) The fact that he was still grieving over Shen and thought he was a monster before when he was a rat made the actually hook up so sweet. I'm also thrilled that Lisa had gotten through her Bubba incident and is with Leonardo but i do have a feeling that she's still going to have some problems with that later on.
I love how you make a good plot instead of mindlessly doing one sex scene after the next but still it would be nice for you to add some more in there heh ;) I hope that you will continue this soon cause I'm a big fan of yours. Don't let the lack of reviews discourage you, you are a great writer!
I think that you did the April-Splinter relationship very well I knew it was coming ;) The fact that he was still grieving over Shen and thought he was a monster before when he was a rat made the actually hook up so sweet. I'm also thrilled that Lisa had gotten through her Bubba incident and is with Leonardo but i do have a feeling that she's still going to have some problems with that later on.
I love how you make a good plot instead of mindlessly doing one sex scene after the next but still it would be nice for you to add some more in there heh ;) I hope that you will continue this soon cause I'm a big fan of yours. Don't let the lack of reviews discourage you, you are a great writer!
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April 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon. I can see how much thought you have put into developing the characters and their relationships. I was dragging into the story from the beginning. I hope you will continue.
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December 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I was desperate for more ! Happy Holidays
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October 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It would be awesome if you updated. Really
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October 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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September 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
omg!! please update!!! i love this sequel :)
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September 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to drop in and say how much i love this story and hope more will be posted soon.
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August 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I hope I get to read more soon . I do love this story.