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July 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG, I LOVED the April Yoshi pairing! It's just...well, it's something that hasn't been done before and I think it's a good and interesting one to explore ^^ Keep up the good work! XD
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July 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
First off, I love this story! Second, you kinda broke my brain with that last chapter. Squicked me out in a 'caught dad/grandpa watching porn' kinda way, plz write some good steamy turtle action soon to help wash my brain of that lol. Anyway, Love what you've got setting up here but whens Mikey's turn? He's my fav and I just wanna give him a hug he's so sad! poor Mikey, your girl will show soon. Love it love it love it love it love it love it love it LOVE IT..... just in case you didn't get that already ^_^
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July 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this and hope theres more soon.
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July 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
good chapters! Thanks for them all at once. hope to get back to the main plot soon
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July 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Go RAPH!!!!!! I love raphael!!!! He needs some lovin too. cool chapter.
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July 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sweet heaven! Here I am, digging myself from under a freaking PILE of work to get a peek at what’s going on in the digital world, - and what do I see? A new, awesome chapter of “Braving It”! Gosh, do I smell love at first… well, finger, from the looks of it? Yep, I do. Awwwwww ^_^ Jokes aside, I think this Hispanic woman is very… colorful; I can practically see her cheap outfit, and see her challenging behavior. The little boy adopting that kind of language is a nice touch; I think it’s what kids in such environment do – start taking after their parents’ manner of speech. No, really, Raph standing up to that woman was funny and intense at the same time. His Spanish impressed me, alright :) Didn’t know Raphael had it in him :D Also, poor Mike… he just makes my heart ache :( I hope Raph is right, and he will meet a good girl who will blow his mind away… We shall wait and see :)
Lotsa love at you, honey!
Thank you for writing this story!
I’ll try to tell you everything in a letter. I’ve got so much to tell you! My head hurts from the sheer number of different kinds of news in my life x_x
Hugs,
Lola
Lotsa love at you, honey!
Thank you for writing this story!
I’ll try to tell you everything in a letter. I’ve got so much to tell you! My head hurts from the sheer number of different kinds of news in my life x_x
Hugs,
Lola
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June 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i really do like this story. i hope i get to see more of lisa and leo. you never mentioned them in the spinoff story or not that i could remember. anyways i like it so far.
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April 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like his and hope you continue !
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April 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
great story! any more?
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March 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
God bless you for continuing Perseverance :) No, seriously, I think I would die of unfulfilled curiosity if you hadn't. And what a way to start a sequel! To my absolute shame, I realized that I haven't been seeing the full desparation of Lisa's situation, being so busy with worrying about Splinter and Charlie/Donnie plotline until now... Man, of COURSE, she's a representative of a post-rape syndrome, or how it is called properly :( Skin scrubbing, and a thousand of other issues... Honestly, I once felt something like that in my life, I can relate to her so damn well. Poor girl... :( Leo is such a sweet man to try and protect/save her from all of this. I freaking ADORE the scene with soap and washing hands in the first chapter. I expected Leo to say anything to her statement about feeling dirty - but I wasn't expecting him to wash her hands and proclaim her clean... This SO freaking rules, as well as his calm reasoning that she wanted to live because she tried to run away from Bubba, - I was practically bouncing with happiness :)
"Raphael sat back on his heels, looking thoughtful. He was sure he knew this one. “You tell them that you’re very sorry, but that the machine says that the limit has been reached.” He grinned, triumphantly, knowing he was right." - I love this passage so much XD It makes me giggle for some reason, I don't know why.
Dancing and Mikey... Oh Mikey :) It's so easy for him to be close to someone, and I can understand Leo's wishing he was like that :) The blue ninja could really use some of his younger brother's smooth moves in the field of communication right about now... But Lisa seems to compensate wherever Leo's lacking; at least it seems like she WILL be everything he isn't when she's back to her usual cheerful self, including crazy fits of dancing, or something just as random and fun :)
The turtles bragging about their muscles just made me burst with laughter :D Man, I had so much fun reading that bit... And Leo's Japanese remarks were so rediculously in-character for him they made me laugh even more :D And... you know, it may be just me, and it may be stupid, but... despite Raph's 'I'm the toughest turtle the world has ever known' behavior, I'm guessing he would be the most gentle and tender and anxious when it would come to treating a girl *a smile of utter endearment* He's just... he's a protector by nature, and he'd die before he'd hurt someone who's weaker than him, physically OR mentally, especially a girl... I don't know, it's just my guess, nothing more; we'll see who Raph really is in your universe when the time comes :)
Don/Charlie/counter... You just killed my brain right there, with that exceptionally naughty and hot mental image... and I like every moment of it ^_^ Go Donnie, you shouldn't be shy anymore, and I'm glad you aren't! And I bet Charlie is in heaven as well, finding herself in the epicenter of the sensual hurricane with an elegant name 'Donatello' XD
Waiting for more of this awesomeness, itching on the edge of my chair!
Wishes of inspiration,
Lola
"Raphael sat back on his heels, looking thoughtful. He was sure he knew this one. “You tell them that you’re very sorry, but that the machine says that the limit has been reached.” He grinned, triumphantly, knowing he was right." - I love this passage so much XD It makes me giggle for some reason, I don't know why.
Dancing and Mikey... Oh Mikey :) It's so easy for him to be close to someone, and I can understand Leo's wishing he was like that :) The blue ninja could really use some of his younger brother's smooth moves in the field of communication right about now... But Lisa seems to compensate wherever Leo's lacking; at least it seems like she WILL be everything he isn't when she's back to her usual cheerful self, including crazy fits of dancing, or something just as random and fun :)
The turtles bragging about their muscles just made me burst with laughter :D Man, I had so much fun reading that bit... And Leo's Japanese remarks were so rediculously in-character for him they made me laugh even more :D And... you know, it may be just me, and it may be stupid, but... despite Raph's 'I'm the toughest turtle the world has ever known' behavior, I'm guessing he would be the most gentle and tender and anxious when it would come to treating a girl *a smile of utter endearment* He's just... he's a protector by nature, and he'd die before he'd hurt someone who's weaker than him, physically OR mentally, especially a girl... I don't know, it's just my guess, nothing more; we'll see who Raph really is in your universe when the time comes :)
Don/Charlie/counter... You just killed my brain right there, with that exceptionally naughty and hot mental image... and I like every moment of it ^_^ Go Donnie, you shouldn't be shy anymore, and I'm glad you aren't! And I bet Charlie is in heaven as well, finding herself in the epicenter of the sensual hurricane with an elegant name 'Donatello' XD
Waiting for more of this awesomeness, itching on the edge of my chair!
Wishes of inspiration,
Lola