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July 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I think your story is wonderful, and insightful. And that you captured each characters personalities, and even accents perfectly. I'm sorry you don't get more reviews or hits on your story. They are really missing out.
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June 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm surprised that Michelangelo left his GBA at April's apartment. I thought that he'd be very protective and possessive of such a device.
Casey Jones is making me laugh, as usual. I keep wondering why he never joined the circus.
And it seems very obvious to me that Master Splinter has approved of Breech and will allow her to stay with the turles in the sewer...
Well, time will tell for sure. So keep updating!
Casey Jones is making me laugh, as usual. I keep wondering why he never joined the circus.
And it seems very obvious to me that Master Splinter has approved of Breech and will allow her to stay with the turles in the sewer...
Well, time will tell for sure. So keep updating!
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May 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OOH i like this story...Don has always been my fav....casey's accent is good but half the time i have to read it twice to understnd it....good portray of his accent tho...please keep going
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May 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Based on Donatello's caring attitude towards both Master Splinter and Breech, I'm tempted to assume that he would easily be able to cope with fatherhood in the near future.
P.S.: Oh, and about Casey's accent, since I'm not from New York or Boston, I can't really qualify as a judge on whether it sounds good or whether it sounds awful. It's just in there and I'm not really bothered by it. I think it only adds to the amusement. 'Nuff said.
P.S.: Oh, and about Casey's accent, since I'm not from New York or Boston, I can't really qualify as a judge on whether it sounds good or whether it sounds awful. It's just in there and I'm not really bothered by it. I think it only adds to the amusement. 'Nuff said.
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May 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I hope that this story eventually ends with Casey and April having a wedding ceremony. And I've always wondered what a half-feline & half-turtle baby would look like... But is it even possible for a reptile and a mammal to copulate in the first place?
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April 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have to say I've always loved the turtles growing up. I haven't gone through all the chapters just yet but I adore it so far. Go Ninja, Go Ninja, GO! There. I've said my peace and salute you. lol
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April 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I think your doing a wonderful job so far on this story <3
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April 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is realy nicely written. Just two chapters in and you have my deepest interest. IN fact, i´ll go check what else you have written right after this. Oh, just so you know, i don´t usualy review just to review so don´t expect something for every chapter, but i will be reading and enjoying all the same. :)