rate_review Reviews

I read this story 3 years ago. Your writing is supperb. The sex was hot. Elektra suducing Robin to get back at Batman was a great plot. Liked the new character, Anneka as well. But I must say that I did not the Batman I came to know in comic books and the movies. Batman is usually portrayed as the cool superhero with all the cool gadgets as well as above average fighting skills. The Batman in your story was a whimp who never even attempted to fight back. Elektra sets him up in an alley and he lets her get away with it? He doesn't challenge her or reveal her true character when she runs for mayor;he doesn't tell Robin why he objects to his seeing her. I'm not being critical of your writing in any way. You write great stories. I just would have like to see Batman fight back before submitting to Elektra.

Brilliant story Wildechild I loved every chapter thanks again for your efforts, I hope there is more to cum!!!!

I love it!! please continue as I can't wait for batman to crumble under her spell

Thanks for the new chapter wildchild I love the total submission and where this is heading - more please!!!

Any chance you'll write more? I know Riot Storm started up again.

Just read chs. 8 & 9, I love it - poor Batman poor Robin - I hope you get on a roll and keep the chapters coming. Thanks again for continuing the story.

Can you put me out of my misery and let me know if you are going to add any more chapters - please write some more it is a brilliant story!!!

I'm digging it. I look forward to more!

brilliant story, I love it! The seduction of Robin to be used as her pawn against Batman - the continual duping of Batman, slowly reeling him in and breaking him - My ultimate fantasies in one story. Please write some more chapters, the unfolding plot has me on the edge!