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for KP Wins Again

by penguinmayhem

person Oric13
schedule September 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Kinky and well written.
You're off to a good start here. I hope you'll continue.
person animekid
schedule January 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wow just wow; I read this on a whim and I was shocked because I never seen a fanfiction with the pack and this before and was wondering how far was this going to go?

*doesn't know if she should read more or not because of her values* God I used to read this comic when I was a preteen ._.;
schedule October 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Naughty. Hope to see more.
SailorNemesis
person mike226
schedule September 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This place really does need more Power Pack stuff.
person Gunwild
schedule August 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I read this inglorious material and... not bad. You use a few too many words, like when you end a sentence with 'indeed' instead of letting it stand on its own, but at least you clearly delight in the willing, Story-of-O-style sex slavery plot, and your passion is in every sentence. I'll read more when you make it.