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for A Wish Not So Come True

by Drea

schedule March 2, 2016 at 12:00 AM
love this!
schedule November 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really love your story! Please continue it. :)
schedule June 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ok so i was reading my old reviews and im kinda weird. But anyways. I wanted to tell you that your story is wonderful. its well written and the characters are unique and interesting. the dialogue is believable though sometimes it gets a little out of hand (immature) for adult women. I love the parts with sammy. No one ever puts small children in stories and its a refreshing change of pace. My only real complaint is the part where they start playing truth or dare. Not only did it drag on but it was forcing a LOT of relationship development into one evening. now i understand they only had until new years but even for fanfiction it was unrealistic. other than that the story is really good. Please keep writing
schedule June 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
P.S. entire conversations in a different language followed by the english translation are NOT fun to read. At all. It doesnt matter what language it was in or how funny what they actually said was. its just frustrating and annoying.
schedule June 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE!!!!! you dont know how much i need the rest of this story. Really. I need to know what happens and how they manage to stay. cause you will have them stay or im attacking you with my muffin launcher.
schedule June 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
MORE!!!!!!!! this is a really good story!! I love what you have so far. Please keep writing?
schedule November 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please update this story. I really want to know what happens to Catey, Mikey, and Andrea! It's an awesome story so far. :)