rate_review Reviews

A very lovely wank story. I love how you captured Parley's voice and her inherent naughtiness. You really sell how it would take only a flimsy pretense to get her to participate in sexy group fun times, so long as Smitty was involved. Also, their sex scene together towards the end was short, but sweet, and with a lovely creamy ending. Mmmm. Annie's presence is more problematic, in that I personally see her relationship with intimacy as being something not easily given away. She may be sexual, but she's more of a "one at a time" gal, and far too self-conscious to really take such frivolous excuses for public nudity seriously. That said, you adequately captured her voice from early-to-midway through the series. And Jones is, well, Jones.

Thanks for writing!

Sexy stuff, did well with the characters. Hope for more fics in this setting, though I mostly like Annie X Kat. Though Jones is fun too...
SailorNemesis

Very nice story. I liked the foot fetish parts, I hope to see more of that.