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by kserasera

person CeeCee
schedule January 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*blinks*

I'm sitting here with a happily glazed look on my face, totally confused at why I haven't seen your stuff sooner. Threesome fic? Good enough. Ric/Star fic? Even better. But Madrox admitting he's been up to mischief with his dupes? Well, that's just like Christmas came a second time this year.

I love the humor and snark. I love the internal dialogue with Jamie. And I love how almost businesslike Star is about it all, kind of intense and borderline scary. And the teleporty space knives thing made me laugh.