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June 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
um how do i put this. Its not that good. Your writing style is well......bad. the dialogue is boring and they reiterate things that dont need to be. the plot flew in from out of no where and is, even for a story that has mutant turtles in it, completely ridiculous. you went from giving the turtles a happy ending, to some subplot that has no point whatsoever. this is not what your summary told me it was going to be. you need a beta. Badly. all in all im very dissapointed.