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Haha, that was cold. Though he did bring it on himself a little.

Thinking back of it, even getting them to third base would take some nudging, but I think giving them a lesbian show beforehand would easily enough guilt them into accepting. Then they'd make use of the transformation gun for the last part.

Also, maybe a reversed scene (mSarah + fElliot) could have potential ?

Well, so much for the multiple summer updates. It's a real shame too, as this really is one of the best erotic fan fics out there. I sincerely hope for more updates sometime in the future. I really want to see a Elliott/Female Tedd scene.

The girls are teasing, but I think a M/M scene would be quite difficult to write (though not impossible)
* The Tedd x Justin pairing is nonexistent.
* The Elliot x Justin pairing has the problem that "casual" sex with an unrequited love can make things worse sentimentally... though it might also solve problems rather than exacerbate them, depending on how it's written.
* The Elliot x Tedd pairing is possible, but if given the option I think both would prefer that Tedd be switched female first. They could probably do it M/M for the girls, but they'd have to ask REALLY nicely for them to go past third base.

Uhm... Wow. This chapter went above and beyond any expectation I had!

This is awesome.

Are we going to see Tedd as a girl.

GAAAAAAAAH KEEP GOING. Xo

You can't leave it on a cliffhanger like this!
Also - Tedd-On-Elliot smexings. Do it.

Just letting you know, Nobody in Particular is stopping his drawings this month, so if you want him to make another piece based off of this, you'd better ask him quick.

When is the next chapter coming up? I cant stand the antici

I'm Commander Shepard, and this is the best fanfic on the website.