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by seyunolu

person Anon
schedule October 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Haha, that was cold. Though he did bring it on himself a little.
person Anon
schedule May 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Thinking back of it, even getting them to third base would take some nudging, but I think giving them a lesbian show beforehand would easily enough guilt them into accepting. Then they'd make use of the transformation gun for the last part.

Also, maybe a reversed scene (mSarah + fElliot) could have potential ?
person James
schedule September 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Well, so much for the multiple summer updates. It's a real shame too, as this really is one of the best erotic fan fics out there. I sincerely hope for more updates sometime in the future. I really want to see a Elliott/Female Tedd scene.
person Anon
schedule September 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
The girls are teasing, but I think a M/M scene would be quite difficult to write (though not impossible)
* The Tedd x Justin pairing is nonexistent.
* The Elliot x Justin pairing has the problem that "casual" sex with an unrequited love can make things worse sentimentally... though it might also solve problems rather than exacerbate them, depending on how it's written.
* The Elliot x Tedd pairing is possible, but if given the option I think both would prefer that Tedd be switched female first. They could probably do it M/M for the girls, but they'd have to ask REALLY nicely for them to go past third base.
person Anon
schedule June 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Uhm... Wow. This chapter went above and beyond any expectation I had!
person Someone
schedule May 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is awesome.

Are we going to see Tedd as a girl.
person Ai Fighter
schedule May 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
GAAAAAAAAH KEEP GOING. Xo

You can't leave it on a cliffhanger like this!
Also - Tedd-On-Elliot smexings. Do it.
person JF
schedule April 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Just letting you know, Nobody in Particular is stopping his drawings this month, so if you want him to make another piece based off of this, you'd better ask him quick.
person Anon
schedule February 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
When is the next chapter coming up? I cant stand the antici
person Shepard
schedule January 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm Commander Shepard, and this is the best fanfic on the website.