rate_review Reviews

Another very nice chapter. I eagerly wait for the next one...

Yay! I'm -so- happy to see the update on here. I've loved this since I first saw it... honestly can't remember how I failed to review it earlier. It's wonderful, though. Very well written and has both a plot and some serious smut that delivers awesomely. The twincest chapter is still by far the best chapter in my opinion (mostly because I have a huge incest fetish) but Elliot/Sarah is very close. I've been looking forward to this in part because it plays to something else I love, notably Elliot eating Sarah out after sex. I would've liked for that bit to be a bit longer/more graphic, but it looks like there may be more Elliot/Sarah to come anyways... I'd certainly love to see what you do with the Cat-Elliot transformation if that ever gets written to go with it!

Anyhow, much love and happiness. I'm looking eagerly forward to the next installment, and for now I'm very happy with what you've done and would just like to say thank you so much for your writing and sharing so far.

To expand on my previous review: I think it's quite well-written, and does not give a feeling of "LOL SKIPTOTHEGOODSTUFF DERP".

However, one thing tickles me a little: The difference in vocabulary between body parts and the rest of the sentences. Most of the text is quite sophisticated, while still not to the point of purple prose; with that, one may expect a mild euphemism when you talk of somebody's naughty bits, and the blunt, direct words are slightly jarring. Well, I guess it's best to call a spade a spade, after all.

It's good to see you back! This is a nice fic. I really enjoy it.

For the love of Kitty Buddha, keep this up! There aren't nearly enough EGSfics out there, and this one is turning out great...!
Just do me a favor and make sure to have a lil' something with Elliot and Girl-Tedd sometime. ;D

When is part 5? I don't want this to become another Firefly.

I love this story, thanks a load.

Are you planning to do some more?

Looks like Chaos up there got what he asked for. XD

I find it almost inappropriately funny how nonchalant Sarah has been described as being about this situation. It's just such a riot to picture her going "Oh, they're banging, that's kinda cool." XD

Keep it up, this is great on so many levels.

I applaud you and this fic in so many ways and for so many reasons that I can't even begin to describe.

Do continue writing it. It would be criminal if you didn't.

Finally! Someone writes an El Goonish Shive story that is sexy and full of smut. I love how the story is starting and you really capture the Ellen and Grace. The conversation between them about why friends don;t have sex together was great. I can't wait for more and seeing who else will be paired up, one thing I'd love to read is a sex scene between the nearly identical Ellen and Eliot, it was awesome that you teased about that. Sexy, well written and insightful. Awesome job.