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March 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Hi There,
I didn't read the whole thing, just bits here and there. It moved, people fucked, sucked and cum. On the other hand, you need to proofread your stuff. LOTS of misspellings, bad punctuation and grammar. Sentences that ran on forever. With polishing, you'd have a fairly decent story here. I'm afraid you won't win any awards, but just a little proofreading would make it sooooo much better. I know it's hard, but I think that you could be pretty good at this. Try to do some short pieces. Get a good beta person. You don't have to go back to school, but it could help. I think that a lot of it was simple typos, hitting an "s" when you wanted to hit an "a." I know that it is tedious and boring, and hard work. But you seem to have a certain flair to your style, and that is why I stayed with it. Keep at it. gnomey
I didn't read the whole thing, just bits here and there. It moved, people fucked, sucked and cum. On the other hand, you need to proofread your stuff. LOTS of misspellings, bad punctuation and grammar. Sentences that ran on forever. With polishing, you'd have a fairly decent story here. I'm afraid you won't win any awards, but just a little proofreading would make it sooooo much better. I know it's hard, but I think that you could be pretty good at this. Try to do some short pieces. Get a good beta person. You don't have to go back to school, but it could help. I think that a lot of it was simple typos, hitting an "s" when you wanted to hit an "a." I know that it is tedious and boring, and hard work. But you seem to have a certain flair to your style, and that is why I stayed with it. Keep at it. gnomey
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March 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
really love your work, keep it up. By the way as a side not could you do something with Hercules or Thor in it they are my two favorite marvel characters.
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October 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'd like to see the Hulk and Red Hulk double-team someone. Maybe Ms. Marvel, maybe Thundra.
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September 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is a hot story with some exciting pairings, but what's up with no Spider-Man
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July 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You should do a couple spider-man stories, other then that great job
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July 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great story! I would like to see Rogue again. Maybe she get fucked by Daken
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June 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see a new chapter! Wonderful work!
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February 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Looking forward to new chapters. You just had Monica in some girl/girl stuff, but how about a big Nextwave orgy?
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November 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great new set of chapters. How about Arana (or Spider-Girl as she's now being called) getting DP'd by Spidey and Human Torch?
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September 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
WOW!
I meant really wow!!
I meant really wow!!