rate_review Reviews

The one thing about spider-man that had attracted so many fans was that it showed his humanity while he carried out being the neighborhood wall-crawler.

This entails his troubles with romance while juggling the his duties behind the mask. His troubles with maintaining his job as the photographer for the Daily Bugle.

Miss Marvel herself finally gets the limelight she deserves while spider-man gets a woman more of his caliber, someone who shares in the same troubles as him..

A job well done, my friend! You've really done something special here. There aren't a lot of Spider-Man/Miss Marvel stories out there. This is actually the only one I know of. lol Even if it's the only one, it's still the best. You did a great job getting Peter and Carol together and making it from a casual fling to something more serious. This chapter seems to be a logical end. They end up moving in together. It's the next step and I love how you had them celebrate. lol You really made their relationship believable. I can see some of this happening in the comics. In fact, I wish I did. I think Caron and Peter have great chemistry and you showed all the potential it had while doing your usual well-developed scenes. Great job, buddy! You should be very proud of this one. I hope you do more like it in the future. Until then, take care and best wishes!

MarvelMaster616

Ch. 5

Good chapter and a good end to the story. Not exactly all of what I would've liked to have seen, but when it is so rare to see quality M/F stories that are comic themed and have Spider-Man and Ms. Marvel, you can't complain too much. A great basic scene between the two and it looks like things are going well with the two as a couple. I would've maybe liked to have seen them go through a couple more challenges like seeing how Ms. Marvel deals with Spider-Man being hurt or injured in battle. But oh well. I like how it turned out. I hope you write more Agent G because stories like this are great.

Hurrah! Happy endings all around!

not enough angst to be a proper spider-man story. You'll have to try again... ;)

A nice end to a very enjoyable story. The only thing that I would have liked to have seen is the story is the meeting between May & Carol to see what May thinks of her nephew's new love interest.

I think this review is a little late, my apologies. Thanks for the update. Great chapter four and I loved the meeting of Black Cat and Ms. Marvel. I'm looking forward to the next chapter and end of the story if that's it. I hope things work out with Carol and Peter. Hope there is another hot scene as well :) .

this a fun read keep up the god work.

Another solid update. Can't wait to see the finale.

Another great chapter, man! This has turned into a real gem. I'm glad you decided to make this longer than one chapter. You've had Peter and Carol be mature yet playful. There's nothing about them that seems out-of-character in this. In this chapter you mixed it up a bit by having them do it in costume on a rooftop. I don't know if Peter would even do something like that with Black Cat. I'm glad she made an appearance. She does come off as a bit of a tease, only wanting Spider-Man and not Peter Parker. I'm glad Miss Marvel told her off. I'm also glad she convinced Peter to go at it on the roof. lol I'm sure that's the kind of thrill sex that only superheroes can enjoy. lol It was a lot of fun to read and it was well done as always. Definitely keep up the great work man. I'll be sad to see this series end, but you've made it work very well. I hope you develop other stories like this. Until next time, take care and best wishes!

MarvelMaster616

I love this story. I wasn't a fan of Ms. Marvel/Spider-man but you have convinced me. If you are looking for ideas for upcoming chapters, maybe an encounter with the Purple Man. Have Spider-Man come to Ms. Marvel's rescue or something. Anyway, looking forward to more and I do hope you'll update again soon.