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for Oathbound

by rubicon541

person jackpot7374
schedule September 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! That was a lot of thought and a perfectly executed plan! And beyond that the writing was great. I would never have thought of anything like that.
person DomRevan
schedule September 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, just wow, which version of WW are we using? And if I start I story could I use some ideas from this?
schedule September 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this story its so good!!
person Yokel
schedule September 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like this story. It has potential to be the best Wonder Woman fic on the site. kepp it up!!!
person Andyman
schedule September 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Truly awesome stuff. Definitely one of the best stories on the site. I can't wait for more.
schedule September 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You know I think this is a unique take on this whole type of story. I mean sure the guy doing this is a bit of a bastard for blackmailing her into it, but he did save her before he thought of it and it didn't occur to him later, he just kind of took advantage of her when he shouldn't have. Although at least he's giving her a lot more freedom than anyone else I've read in these types of stories.

Although I kind of did wish for the second chapter to go on but I guess we'll get to the good stuff later. I am wondering if this will just have the sex scene and then end the story or will it go on as you explore how this whole arrangement goes between them.
schedule September 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy this story. It has a real plot that fits nicely into the WW mythos. The dialogue is well written, and the characterization believable. The sex to date fits into the plot well and is not rushed. Can't wait for the next chapter.