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you should do a sequal when she found by the new 52 wonder woman and both rape kill darius

What is it with you people and these rape stories?!?!?! I hope you're aware that rape in real life is anything but sexy.

I'm not much in snuff stories, but it was awsome. You're very talented writer, man.

I can only give it two stars, and not because of the subject matter.

Most people enjoy a well crafted story around their smut and while the writing isn't bad here you should read up on Mary Sues when you're making your own character. You have a well planned out backstory for your character but you rushed through explaining it in the first two paragraphs and in the end it felt wasted and pointless because nothing was really touched on again. The story would've been exactly the same without the first page to explain why he's so great and all powerful.

Wonder Woman comes across as wooden and fake and whiny.

Maybe you just don't like her character at all, but this story mostly just feels fneh. No drama, no suspense and feels like you were pissed because you got dumped or rejected and made your fantasy you to take out some aggression on a pathetic rendition of Wonder Woman or are one of those guys who can't stand the idea of powerful women.

y'know, this isn't normally something I'd read. But I agree about the ratings thing, that's just wrong. Because you write squick, doesn't mean you should get negative ratings for it. After a few years of seeing what you say about your own work, my curiosity got the better of me, so I had to take a look. Even with the strong warnings, and KNOWING I wouldn't necessarily like this, you're a damn good writer.

you know, it pisses me off to see people rating your stories with 1 star JD. Sure, the content of this one (and pretty much all of them in fact) is pretty messed up, but you obviously put a lot of work into them. And this website shouldn't be just about people rating stories based on whether they approve of the content. I mean, wouldn't it be better if readers actually acknowledged that you've got some decent writing skills, and that your imagination - although it is admittedly fucked up - is also pretty damn impressive. I liked it. I couldn't really get into all the guro stuff, but that's just not my cup of tea. I'd give you six stars for the quality of the writing, and the well-developed characters. The first few paragraphs of build-up, where you summarise Hecate's rape and Darius' birth, were just awesome.