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May 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Gasp!!!!!! This is so awesome... I can't find anything as captivating and perfect while waiting for more, and that's not per lack of trying, believe me :) this is just soooooo moving, intense, human, and downright addictive :)
Please, say there is more coming soon :) they still have so much to deal with, and they so deserve a true happy ending :)
Please!!!!(begging on my knees) ;p
Please, say there is more coming soon :) they still have so much to deal with, and they so deserve a true happy ending :)
Please!!!!(begging on my knees) ;p
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April 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Whew! At least Bruce remembers where they left off! But that man needs a reality check on his self-worth :) and I know just the superman to set his compass straight :)
Still, poor baby... What a trauma he's been through... Somehow, I think little Timmy will help him see his true self in a god light... The truth comes from children's mouth after all :)
Soooooo hooked to this story :)
Still, poor baby... What a trauma he's been through... Somehow, I think little Timmy will help him see his true self in a god light... The truth comes from children's mouth after all :)
Soooooo hooked to this story :)
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April 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Awww, Tim got a puppy (Bruce is definitely moving toward a family way of life ;p)
And he and Clark banter once again :) but is it only an act?.. Clark is so cute when he flies around just for kicks ;p and carrying Bruce is the cherry on top ;p
Please, let them work it out together like the heroes they are, brave and caring. Will we ever get more insight into what the Joker did to Bruce in the crazy home setting?
Please, please, please, keep this story coming! Didn't leave them unresolved and apart forever :)
Terrific work! More soon, please!
And he and Clark banter once again :) but is it only an act?.. Clark is so cute when he flies around just for kicks ;p and carrying Bruce is the cherry on top ;p
Please, let them work it out together like the heroes they are, brave and caring. Will we ever get more insight into what the Joker did to Bruce in the crazy home setting?
Please, please, please, keep this story coming! Didn't leave them unresolved and apart forever :)
Terrific work! More soon, please!
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April 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow :) I'm so getting addicted to this awesome story :) I can't believe that you only got 6 comments so far...
Were to begin with my comment... The characterizations are superb, Bats and Supes in particular :) from the Jesus line of their first time, to the shut up in bed ;p and, of course the hot tub 'trap'. Oh, and I completely agree with Kal's plans :) the kids are also terrific :)
On the other end of the spectrum, Brucey really needs help despite his incredibly dexterous feet ;p oh boy will Kal be mad at a certain clown whew he hears about it ;p the suspense is unbearable :)
Do you post this story elsewhere, on a site with a reader alarm?
More soon, please!
Were to begin with my comment... The characterizations are superb, Bats and Supes in particular :) from the Jesus line of their first time, to the shut up in bed ;p and, of course the hot tub 'trap'. Oh, and I completely agree with Kal's plans :) the kids are also terrific :)
On the other end of the spectrum, Brucey really needs help despite his incredibly dexterous feet ;p oh boy will Kal be mad at a certain clown whew he hears about it ;p the suspense is unbearable :)
Do you post this story elsewhere, on a site with a reader alarm?
More soon, please!
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April 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Awwww, poor Brucey needs a hug :( and Kal needs to get down to Earth for real :)
Great characterizations once again. I felt the doctor's pain all the way to the bone, there, and Bats' humiliation... Damn that Joker to the seven hells...
Reading on!
Great characterizations once again. I felt the doctor's pain all the way to the bone, there, and Bats' humiliation... Damn that Joker to the seven hells...
Reading on!
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April 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh no... Hurry up, Kal!! But thank god he took a page off Bats' book!
What about the boys? Are they vigilantes as well? Or only in training? I expected at least Dick to be out there searching for him, probably with Jason while Tim worked the computer.
Oh well, that is still awesome!
What about the boys? Are they vigilantes as well? Or only in training? I expected at least Dick to be out there searching for him, probably with Jason while Tim worked the computer.
Oh well, that is still awesome!
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April 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Gasp!!! What a rescue! Go Brucey! Go Kal :) oh shit, indeed ;p and the license plate joke was a welcome comedy relief from all the tension :)
But now, poor baby... I'm crying in sympathy for him... He's back to little Bruce like when his parents died, isn't he?..
Can't wait to find out how Kal heals him :)
But now, poor baby... I'm crying in sympathy for him... He's back to little Bruce like when his parents died, isn't he?..
Can't wait to find out how Kal heals him :)
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April 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Drying tears... Gosh, this is messed up.. But Kal is saving Bats' rep, huh? Cool :) and the boys are adorable with him :) and Bruce of course :)
Reading on :)
Reading on :)
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April 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
What the holy hell, indeed :) I wonder how he'll react when he'll really wake up and realize that it's real :)
Reading on :)
Reading on :)
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April 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Awwwww :) and Bruce is back! Yeah! But poor Clark... He's so kind and loving... Bruce needs to give him an opening.
Sigh... If only I also didn't need sleep like Supes ;p can't wait for tomorrow to read more :)
Sigh... If only I also didn't need sleep like Supes ;p can't wait for tomorrow to read more :)