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November 30, 2016 at 12:00 AM
For what it's worth, I'm reading this and very much enjoying it! I love the way you're bringing Archie and Ethel together! I hope you are able to write more soon.
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June 25, 2016 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE!!!! PLEASE UPDATE!! I WANT 2 SEE WHERE THIS STORY ENDS!!!!
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September 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
lol-it's good----but you arent going to get any more reviews
now that you have reggie acting like the kind of dickhead he
is in the REAL stories------everyone here wants to believe in
the bizzaro eviltwin universe where reggie is dear and nice and
archie is a prick---i dont care that veronica is a bitch in your
story since reggies an asswipe too----no hypocrisy there.
now that you have reggie acting like the kind of dickhead he
is in the REAL stories------everyone here wants to believe in
the bizzaro eviltwin universe where reggie is dear and nice and
archie is a prick---i dont care that veronica is a bitch in your
story since reggies an asswipe too----no hypocrisy there.
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May 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
The Story getting better the more I read but I still don't follow Archie's logic about Betty.
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April 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Archie's not wanting to be with the good girl Betty was never the problem. His preferring the high-maintenance Ronnie is not the problem. The problem is, Betty is just a convenience to him, something to fall back on when things don't go well with Ron. That's why he does not like when Betty is interested in someone else. Archie wants Betty to wait around for his pleasure, for his ego boosts.
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December 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Moose is usually such a sweet kid to say anything cruel to anyone. he just beats up guys who hits on his girl.
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May 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Archie giving Ethel advice :) Interesting
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April 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
“Is she every guy’s flavor?Probably not. But she has her own pizzazz.” loved this. Great chapter :)
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April 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I like how you're building the character development... very realistic. :)
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March 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Luved this :) Great writing.
"You walk fast." "Not fast enough." LOL
"You walk fast." "Not fast enough." LOL