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November 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the update! I'm glad to see two guys fighting over Betty. I' m also happy to see Reggie not being able to be with Veronica fully! And Teresa telling him off was so good!
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October 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
What Betty should have told Reggie is, "Oh hon, you are so right that i shouldn't be seen in public with Cole, coz ppl would talk. So i have decided to see him only in my bedroom, where no one will see!" ;D
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October 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I was so happy to see your update today! Thank you so much I just love this story!
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October 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Very good chapter.
I feel a little sorry for Veronica.
I feel a little sorry for Veronica.
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October 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love it! I was so happy to see this update! I love that Cole likes her and Reggie is jealous. I will be waiting very impatiently for the next chapter. Thank you very much for sharing your writing with us!
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October 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Veronica has really lost it.
I hope Cole is hot.
I hope Cole is hot.
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October 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I was so happy to see this chapter up today. Thank you so much! I got to say Reggie in this story seems like a dog. Very selfish and uncaring of Betty. Don't get me wrong I love your story but I find this Reggie hard to like. Again thank you for the chapter, it brightened my day!
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September 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
“How did you come to sleep with that bitch?? I hate you!! I hate you both!! Daddy!!!” That rings very true! I am sure Veronica really would scream DADDYYYYY in such a situation LOL!
Chick Cooper went all mafia big brother and Ricky Mantle behaved like some character from a mexican soap. But i guess all that goes with the theme of the story.
The special license thing, can that be obtained without the consent of the parties? I have only read about that in historical novels. Did not think it could be done in this day and age.
Chick Cooper went all mafia big brother and Ricky Mantle behaved like some character from a mexican soap. But i guess all that goes with the theme of the story.
The special license thing, can that be obtained without the consent of the parties? I have only read about that in historical novels. Did not think it could be done in this day and age.
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September 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. All your stories keep me entertained and I read them over and over. Thank you for sharing your ideas and writing with us. I can,t wait for the next chapter and I really hope Regie comes to love Betty like he should!
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September 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I wanted to add I can't stand Veronica, I never could. I mean really how many people would treat their "best friend" the way she does. Archie's is a goof and while he's not my favorite character I don't hate him ( though I do love to see Betty taken from him and him regretting it). I know you have plans for this story and I totally love your writing but maybe in another story could Veronica get her comeuppance? Anyways thank you again :)