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by Misskiki47

schedule September 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yay an update!
Wow Chick is scary!
schedule August 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I really respect the idea of not having sex before marriage, but i don't hold with the 'Virginity is only for women' crap. Betty wanting to remain a virgin until marriage, but not having the requirement that her man be a virgin too, seems like double standards.
schedule August 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I can’t believe I used to like kissing him, ugh! Were his kisses always so, wet? Yuck!! OUCH so harsh! :D
schedule August 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
' The first time was definitely an accident. But the second time could only be because he wanted her.' sooo technically, that should be one indiscretion XD
schedule August 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
No wonder Betty is bored with Archie; he is so unsexy.
schedule August 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
that part about Jughead being able to hold his alcohol better than anyone is very believable.
schedule August 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i wonder what Reggie is going to do now?
person JLinz
schedule July 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I really like how you captured the essence of the characters. I used to read the comics heavily with my mom and got to know the characters very well. I always hated Reggie but you put him in a different aspect for me. The only reason why I liked Veronica was because of her nickname (LOL) but I always had sympathy for Betty. Nice perspective; looking forward to more!
schedule July 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Archie can never be faithful
schedule July 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
for all her money, Veronica can be surprisingly cheap.