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for Rooftop

by justalilwriter

person Elden
schedule January 31, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Thank you! Great work can't wait to find out when what happens next. I also like that you didnt over describe you characters.

person Felicia2235
schedule January 8, 2017 at 12:00 AM

i love this. Please update soon 

person Felicia2235
schedule October 19, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Love this. Please continue!!!!!

person Sophie 16
schedule March 7, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter! The Parr where Raphael shields her from the drunk was so romantic and sweet. I can't wait till the next chapter 😘
person Sophie 16
schedule January 27, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!! I'm so glad you're picking up the story!!!
person iecunns
schedule August 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I really liked how well constructed you've made the story; how the characters aren't stunted card-board copies of themselves because they're just there to reach the goal.
There's a real effort and consideration to set the stage and make things interesting and believable in their interaction with each other, and I really appreciate that.
Just one thing made me sad. When I noticed this was your only story. I would love to read more from you.

Thanks.
person Lee
schedule May 16, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Great story! I really want to know what will happen next! Hope you haven't given up on this story!!
person Lin
schedule September 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Hey there!

Thank you for your story. I'm enjoying it tremendously!
Love the character-work you've done with the turtles: in my oppinion your Leo is an accurate adult virsion of the FL we all know and love... so keep it up! Mikey is unmistakable and Don- the admirable genius- awesome! ...and Raphael ooooohhh baby.. one of the best! The temper, the rage, the bad-boy... Big Rad-(it killed me) that is the end of me!! I'm in LOVE and nothing can save me now ...

Excited with anticipation for more good-reads by your hand, do continue the awesomeness!!!!

Turtle-lover, Lin
person Argent8
schedule August 22, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I am COMPLETELY in love with this story. It is by far the most well written TMNT fic I have come across anywhere, you have done an amazing job! I know its been over a year since you last posted, but please please please continue this!!! I'm completely hooked and need more chapters desperately.....Erin is a wonderful OC which is so rare, it was easy to become invested in her and your version of the guys. Everything feels so real and believable (major kudos to you considering this is TMNT), both scenario and character interaction wise. You've handled the burgeoning connection between Erin and Raph perfectly as well, not moving too quickly towards romance or even proper attraction. Again, realistic! Please, I'm begging you to continue this masterpiece of a story.
person Seltap
schedule August 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I'm read this in one night, I was so hooked right away. Please tell me you plan to continue, I was heartbroken when I saw it was last updated so long ago. Your story is so well written.