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by justalilwriter

person laloga
schedule December 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hiya! Just wanted to say that I'm greatly enjoying this fic. You've done some fantastic work, not just with the (spot-on) characterization of the Turtles, but with your OCs as well! Erin and her friends feel so realistic, like I could meet them on the street. And you've captured all the guys perfectly - I love your rendition of Don, in particular. Fabulous work! I'm looking forward to reading more! :)
person Lizard
schedule February 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!J Not everyone can use Raph as a main character due to his personality but you make it seem so easy. I'm really looking forward to reading the next chapter. So please update soon!!!
schedule February 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great update! Glad everyone is getting closer....especially Big Red. Muwahaha!
schedule February 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Love the story so far! Erin is a cool chick. Can't wait to see how things develop with Big Red ;)
schedule February 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Loving the story so far!
Please update soon!! :)
person q212
schedule January 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
ahh just what i was looking for, i love a good tmnt story more so especially one centered around Raphael. very well written as an extra bonus. i will be eagerly awaiting the next chapter. ps i like the character development.
person EvaBrick
schedule January 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is really good! You've really captured Raphael's character. Looking forward to the next chapter. :)