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April 3, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Welcome back. Enjoyed the scenes with Red Hood/"Jack White" trying to adjust to his new personality and role . . . and failing miserably, if the end of the chapter is anything to go by. Also enjoyed the scenes of Artemis and M'gann getting so very intimately reacquainted after the trauma of the events of last chapter or so. Looking forward to your next chapter, and how everything resolves itself or blows up.
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October 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Really enjoyed the story so far, hope you plan to write more.
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August 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
chap 8, good stuff.
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July 21, 2013 at 12:00 AM
good a another teen titan fanfiction
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July 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
All I can say is that this is a lot of fucking fun with the D.C. characters we know and love!
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
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June 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
how about some incest between beast boy and his sis. Bonus points for including artemis
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June 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I don't have too much to say but I am really enjoying this story, thanks!
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June 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hm, throwing in some other couples? Nice touch. And many thanks for not killing Artemis.
BTW, not to try and supplant Aysha, but I'm also available to beta, and have no stories I'm currently working on. Same thing applies, send me the finished chapter, I'll get it back to you in a day or two.
BTW, not to try and supplant Aysha, but I'm also available to beta, and have no stories I'm currently working on. Same thing applies, send me the finished chapter, I'll get it back to you in a day or two.
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June 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for not actually killing Artemis/Tigress and now can’t wait to see the fail out of what M’gann did to the Joker.
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June 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This was fucking awesome to great scenes with two hot couples than the rest of the chapter was just a spectacular no, seriously, I really enjoyed this chapter :D
as for you, needing a beta send me a PM at Aysha c.c. on the form telling me what you're looking for. As a beta, I require that the chapter is complete before it's sent to me. I'll read through it, making corrections as I go. The corrections I'll make will be to grammar, sentence structure, some spelling if necessary. Relying on spell check, seeing as how I'm dyslexic, and the numerous prepositional words that I've noticed you often leave out.
Please keep in mind that I am writing my own stories and it may take a few days to complete any corrections, depending on the size of the chapter. If you want to reference my work. You can read this story here: http://cartoon.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=600093819
as for you, needing a beta send me a PM at Aysha c.c. on the form telling me what you're looking for. As a beta, I require that the chapter is complete before it's sent to me. I'll read through it, making corrections as I go. The corrections I'll make will be to grammar, sentence structure, some spelling if necessary. Relying on spell check, seeing as how I'm dyslexic, and the numerous prepositional words that I've noticed you often leave out.
Please keep in mind that I am writing my own stories and it may take a few days to complete any corrections, depending on the size of the chapter. If you want to reference my work. You can read this story here: http://cartoon.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=600093819