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Really hot chapter :)
Too bad they got the dress dirty though!

Dying to see how Reggie means to sabotage Archie as his co-bestman :D

Me LIKES!! I really think Reg respects Betty's feelings and cares for her much more than she ever could.. both in the comics and your story.. like during their first he let her think he was Andrews *shudder*. What do you think? Plus, no protection. What's going on? ;)

I'm fine with these two going through the motions of just using each other for a release for a while. People don't fall in love over night, especially after being just friends for so long. I almost feel a little sorry for Betty; she's worrying about Archie hearing what happened between her and Reggie, as though that will make a difference in her chances at being with HIM, and then Reggie is calling her a fuck buddy. She seems like she's about to get her heart broken...

Archie getting cold feet is funny, yet genuine. Almost mirrors the Life With Archie series. I like that Reggie isn't letting the opportunity slip by to get in Archie's way, and again, it's a genuine reaction. Just because Betty rocked his world, he isn't ready to give up his fight for the prize, namely Veronica, which is pretty much in keeping with ALL of the Archie comics over the years. At some point, Reggie needs to realize that pleasing Veronica is a 24/7 job and that she's very selfish, a trait he shares with her, and that they will never make the right match.

I think Bets needs to make Reg fight for her a little. Not make him jealous (I wouldn't mind that) but just not give in if he's going to be treating her like a "fuck buddy."

I love smut, but only when it has a great passionate love story with it (and is well written). And yours is doing great. I could never make-up my mind on whether I hate Ron or not.. there are times when you have this extreme urge of slapping her tight but then there have been instances when she has been by betty's side or even Ethel's side (i remember this one story where she helped groom ethel for prom) so I can do with both nasty Ron and sweetheart Ron. I definitely hate Andrews though.

Come on, Bets! pretending it was Archie? You think that clod could ever have technique like that? He would have never manage to find the right button ;D
"Could he have learned this just from watching Archie?" :D Does she mean that Reggie has watched Archie doing this with somebody?

Good chapter :) Steamy! Poor Reg, putting on a brave face.
I used to hate Veronica when I was young, now I appreciate her better. Archie is the one I hate, he is a spineless sleazy character. Sometimes the Archie comic stories make it seem like its Veronica's fault that Betty can't be happy with Archie, but why should Veronica want her boyfriend to cheat on her?! Of course she gets mad when she finds Archie cheating on her with Betty (or any other hottie that comes along), what girl would not? If Archie wanted to be with Betty, he would have broken up with Ron. But he would never do that. Ronnie IS his girlfriend, he just wants to have Betty on the side too. Archie is such a creep.

GAH!

Darn it, Betty! Give poor Reggie credit where credit is due!

That's it. Now you have to write a followup scene in one of your upcoming chapters where he tells her to say his name when they're intimate, a full-on "look me in the eyes" encounter where she has to own up to the fact that it isn't Archie who is wild about her and who would do anything to please her. A hot guy snuggled up at your back first thing in the morning deserves a sweeter reception than she gave him!!!

Still, this is great. I love this story, I've loved every update, and I stalk the Comics category uploads to see if you've added to it all the time. Thanks for bringing it.

She called him... whhhaaaattt? Damn her! Reg was such a sweetie to her. Next chapter needs to be sooner than this, please, please, please. Hoping you are not too busy.Great chapter.

finishh pleasse is so good finishh it:))