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for Forbidden Desire

by JLinz

schedule June 7, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Okay it cut off my review. That was the best line of the fic and now you should let Wally have his Mila!
schedule June 5, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Oh shit, does she get preggers and have little Martian babies???
person Tahn
schedule June 2, 2016 at 12:00 AM
He's gonna be super mad when she finally breaks off from him. Oh and imagine what he's gonna do to Wally
person Tahn
schedule January 3, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Take that! I hope she gets to be with her kids.
schedule August 13, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I told you I was going to get back to this, I was closer to the end of the chapter than I realized.

I like it so far but I can't help but picture the martian as a human. Is there something wrong with my imagination or what? Anyways, so cute him munching on oreos, hope he doesn't get too many crumbs in the bed... :D

CL
person Tahn
schedule July 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Poor Wally. It sucks that both of them love her. Maybe they can share, like Tabs and Doc share Marvin? Although Tabs doesn't know that...oh dear.
person Tahn
schedule July 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ah, there's the Martian sex, but where are the toes and molesty ears? I don't think it's gonna end well when miss electricity finds out about them.
person Asher
schedule October 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is reallly good. Would you be open to a Batman/Batgirl prompt ?

Prompt : Bruce and Barbara (pre-oracle) have an affair & must keep it away from Catwoman.