rate_review Reviews

So much potential.  Would love to read more of this.

This need to be continued or have a sequel with wonder woman. It is fantastic and their aren't much Power Girl stories around.

What I like about this story is that you don't know if or how evil Alex may be. He could be a complete monster or he could be a naïve but spoiled young man with powers that have farther reaching consequences than he can understand. Personally, I'm hoping for evil. There are many cliches and themes you could explore very well all while slaving heroine by villainness to Alex. I look forward to compounding darkness or spiralling chaos. My advice is to take your time with it. If Alex intends to conquer DC he will have a pretty big stable of slaves. It would suck for great characters to end up as little more than a masturbatory speed bump.

Keep writing there is a great story in the making here. PS I look forward to Zatanna most of all.

A small note: when accessing AFF via cell phone, your story is nearly unreadable.

Very sexy story. Hope to see more soon. Hopefully Wonder Woman will get some of this action.

Very good read! Had me thinking how the hormones would play in the story, since it seemed like a blackmail kind of story until PG started lusting after him. the attention to detail was also a strong point.
The way you described PG throughout the fic was amazing and it's always a pleasant surprise when authors give PG other attributes, like her legs and ass, some attention. The incest at the end just leave me with a lot of questions about their involvement. I'm really excited for next chapters!

Great job. Looking forward to the next chapters.

Fantastic stuff, so far. This story hits all my buttons. It'd be great to see Batgirl next!