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September 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Hey, really good going!
Liked Catwoman getting to meet with the girls and being sympathetic to them- taking in the strays like that, so sweet!
Spoiler continues to be a massively cute dork, just like a remember her being. :)
Batgirl (or Black Bat)is the way I remember too, you write her very well. Not saying much, but what she does say tends to be either heart-achingly sad or some-what puzzled because of her lack of real world knowledge.
Really good character interactions- please keep it up! :)
Liked Catwoman getting to meet with the girls and being sympathetic to them- taking in the strays like that, so sweet!
Spoiler continues to be a massively cute dork, just like a remember her being. :)
Batgirl (or Black Bat)is the way I remember too, you write her very well. Not saying much, but what she does say tends to be either heart-achingly sad or some-what puzzled because of her lack of real world knowledge.
Really good character interactions- please keep it up! :)
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September 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. Batman's reaction is perfectly believable after what he's just gone through (heck, he's a hardass when he's in a GOOD mood), the others are acting and reacting as I would expect, I love the bond between Cass and Steph, and having Selena look at the girls like strays for her to take care of... yeah, that works.
I do hope you continue on with this story. So often it seems like whenever I start getting invested in a fic on this site it either gets abandoned shortly after, or the author deletes it all together. That's usually why I stick to reading stories that have already been completed, but this one really drew me in and so far I'm glad it did. I look forward to the next chapter.
I do hope you continue on with this story. So often it seems like whenever I start getting invested in a fic on this site it either gets abandoned shortly after, or the author deletes it all together. That's usually why I stick to reading stories that have already been completed, but this one really drew me in and so far I'm glad it did. I look forward to the next chapter.
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August 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Very Nice.
Nice grasp of character and dialogue. I'm not familiar at all with the new '52 reboot' stuff- seems like too much effort for me. But I do like me some Catwoman, and Cassandra Cain ws always a pretty neat character to me.
F/F doesn't get enough appreciation on this site, so please continue, this has some real potential!
Nice grasp of character and dialogue. I'm not familiar at all with the new '52 reboot' stuff- seems like too much effort for me. But I do like me some Catwoman, and Cassandra Cain ws always a pretty neat character to me.
F/F doesn't get enough appreciation on this site, so please continue, this has some real potential!
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August 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
The story is interesting. The author plainly knows how to write well, with an intersting main character, who is the 'sidekick,' for a change, and an equally interesting secondary character. I really liked it.
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August 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
A story focused on Steph, Cass and Selina? AND they're going to be together before it's over? Yes, please!
Honestly, I haven't been following these three since the reboot, (only DC book I was still reading was Wonder Woman and I'll probably be giving that up now that Azzarello is leaving), but it does seem from your characterization that they're not too different from their older versions, which is great. I've always liked the idea of Steph and Cass working together, and having Selina as a mentor is something I hadn't considered before. This should be an interesting story, and I look forward to reading more of it.
Honestly, I haven't been following these three since the reboot, (only DC book I was still reading was Wonder Woman and I'll probably be giving that up now that Azzarello is leaving), but it does seem from your characterization that they're not too different from their older versions, which is great. I've always liked the idea of Steph and Cass working together, and having Selina as a mentor is something I hadn't considered before. This should be an interesting story, and I look forward to reading more of it.