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September 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant!!! Haven't read a story this good in a long time. You had me in the first chapter when Ivy outlined her plot for Batman. Then the duping of Batman - YESSS!!! I hope there's more to CUM for the bat. Thanks for posting the story
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September 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wow the flood gates have opened on the reviews it seems.
Thank you one and all for your kind words and welcomes. It is good to see my story has been really enjoyed.
I am working on a stand alone Harvey Bullock story and trying to lay the ground work for Downfall part two, I cannot give away any plot details but I hope to get both stories posted here in the near future.
Thank you one and all for your kind words and welcomes. It is good to see my story has been really enjoyed.
I am working on a stand alone Harvey Bullock story and trying to lay the ground work for Downfall part two, I cannot give away any plot details but I hope to get both stories posted here in the near future.
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September 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This was a very good 1st story for AFF. Welcome to our community.
Perhaps I am wrong but are you hinting that there will be a potential fight between Catwoman and Batgirl? Hope I'm right. I haven't read a good story like that in some time.
Perhaps I am wrong but are you hinting that there will be a potential fight between Catwoman and Batgirl? Hope I'm right. I haven't read a good story like that in some time.
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September 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the first review.
Really glad you liked it and sorry for the disappointment...but...
There will be a part two to the story only hinted at in the epilogue so do not worry you will get to see the downfall of Batman.
Really glad you liked it and sorry for the disappointment...but...
There will be a part two to the story only hinted at in the epilogue so do not worry you will get to see the downfall of Batman.
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September 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This is very good. You did a very nice job writing about Harley Quinn in particular.
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September 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
That was an awesome story. Hopefully Ivy and Harley get their revenge against Batman.
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September 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I hope his identity as Bruce Wayne is exposed.
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September 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Nice story. Especially since it is your first effort on the site. I do admit that I am a bit disappointed by the outcome. Why am I disappointed? It seems a little like false advertising to me. I was hoping for a Batman loses story. :[