Sorry for the late review.
Aside from some grammar errors and typos, this was really good. I’m not into choking, but the rest was good. The sex was nice and the character actions made sense for the most part.
I take it that the brief red in Raven’s eyes is going to lead somewhere?
You know what's great?
Both the fact that you posted a new chapter and the new chapter itself. Loved the smut and the way you wrote the characters.
Nice smut with Pantha, especially when Beast Boy started dominating her.
Good jobs as always. Nice humor and great smut, especially the anal part. Hope we get to see the other women experience the same pleasure as Bumblebee!
The new chapter was pretty funny and sexy. Especially the ending with Argent walking out of the bathroom while messy. Also regret not asking you to make Starfire's party outfit similar to this shadbase drawing: http://www.shadbase.com/teen-titans-go-fuck-page-23/, but oh well.
Nice work on the second and third chapter. Very good smut and very humorous.
Great start and very hot as always. Already can't wait for the second chapter.