It's a special treat whenever a new chapter of this story pops up. My favorite series on this site.
Happy to see this is stil being worked upon. Found it a couple days ago and was a bit worried it was dropped.
Can't wait to see mroe of Dinah
So happy this story is back. An incredible mix of mystery and dark, perverse sex. Can't wait to see if Dinah and Barbara win, or join themselves.
Damn man, one of the best written stories i have come across online. Can't wait for more chapters and when the other 2 joins in
I'm on chapter 2 and so far I dig it! ;)
ahem... MORE!!!!
Yet another incredible chapter. I can't praise it enough. Keeps leaving me wanting more each time I finish one.
Another great chapter.
The reveal of our main antagonist did not disapoint and I cannot wait to see him in action. He ozzes confidence but isn't arragonat to the point where you wonder if they have a self aware plot shield, his verbal clash with Canary was great with some brilliant back and forth between them that had great tension and I loved seeing her appriciate his body/while still wanting to kick his ass.
As always looking forward to the next chapter, had you considered bringing in other DC ladies for this school like Zatanna, Vixen ect. or just keep it to the main BOP trio?
Yet another exciting chapter! This build up to the sex scenes is too good.
Really good second chapter.
I love how you just had Barbra figure out what could be the cause of Huntress's change with comic book logic, letting it feel as if these characters do exist in a world where magic rings, hypnotisim and other weird stuff are the norm for costumed heroes, while also listing reasons as to why they simply cannot take off the ring, which again fits the world around them.
Good amount of setup in this chapter hope there is more smut in next one but I am really enjoying the amount of detail put into these updates as its not just a mad rush to the good stuff. Hope that maybe Black Canary gets restless and tries to investiage on her own which leads to some new info as well as some action.
Looking forward to the next chapter.