rate_review Reviews

There are absolutely no words to describe how utterly amazing this story is and how badly I wish there were more to read. But I'll try: from the sex scenes to the characterization s, you nailed everything in a perfect and believable manner. I simply adore how you show the trauma of Diana's rape and how it effects her, yet keep her the same strong woman she's supposed to be. I can't stress enough how people utterly tend to mess that up and it's so refreshing to see the trauma and characterization of a character portrayed in a correct and likable manner. No OoC for the sake of your story or a sex scene and hot damn, I'm loving it: that's what makes fanfics so fun, being able to see your favorite characters in situations and the writer to make it believable and you do it in spades.

You also nailed the suspense of wanting to know who was behind it all and even if that's been revealed, the why or complete reasoning is still a luring question, which encompasses Batman so well. Basically, you know the characters, their world, and it shows. And that's rarer than you think these days in fanfics so it's just so damn refreshing to see it done so well.

This is seriously one of the best fanfics I've read in a while, let alone with DC and I absolutely can not wait for the continuation of it! You OC's and reading this made my day. Now I just wish there was more to read, as I'm interested to see where it will go, LOL.

this story is AWESOME! Absolutly brilliant. is there any way you can message me when a new chapter comes out? or would i need to give you my email adress?

Please update soon........... You can really write....... Do you have any more work to read??

This was so unbelievably GOOD! Oh, please continue! This story rocks!

You still there, darkamazon? Update, possibly?

this is probably the best and most interesting piece of story involving sex AND rape
while I do find the rape quite flinch-worthy to read (wonder why) the rest of the story is quite enthralling and your Bruce is simply magnetizing, your descriptions of his feelings and his ways are wonderful. I found this story quite some time ago and I'm sad to see it hasn't been updated. I hope you're not stuck and that you plan to come back. It's worthy of a good end!

good job
cheers

I'm dying here... Update, please?

This is some of the best BM/WW fanfic I have ever read, erotica or otherwise. Please continue, I can't wait to read the ending.
P.S. - Can Lex get the crap beat out of him somewhere along the line?

This is the first fic I read where I blushed. These were my childhood heroes being taken to a sexual level. I can honestly say I don't remember Superfriends or DC Comics making me think or imagine half the scenerioes you have here.

If and when you return to this story, I suggest you reread it for the words which probably changed during spell check, look for the he/shes because you have switched in a few places, and pat yourself on the back for creating a VERY realistic story. As I read I got lost in the story.

Wow, this is one of the best, no, this is THE best rape fi scene i've read. Good job, interesting plot and all that. Keep up the good work!