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December 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great story, really dark I love it, please continue.
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December 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Dude that was so...intense...it was awesome. CONTINUE!!!!!
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December 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oops, forgot to add this. I think it's really great Batman has been... planning ("The Batman ALWAYS has a plan" *snicker*) how best to, uh, approach Diana about her problem. It's very much in character, and really nice of him. Then again, he's also in love, so why wouldn't he? ^^
Umm... I just got one small problem: I couldn't help but LOL when Batman said "baby". It's quite OOC for him, but I wonder if perhaps he was trying to get into the character of the rapist? IMHO, "Princess" is almost like a petname for Diana for him. Hearing Batsy say "baby"likelike hearing Diana say "dude". XD
That aside, I think the new plot development is fantastic. And he wants her to move in!!! Okay, I can understand the rationale behind it (besides J'onn would be getting all those "nice dreams" from Diana from now on), but still!!
Oh yeah, I would like to see how the rest of the JLA reacts to the news of Diana's rape. So far, I've seen Clark's and J'onn's. I remember this fic where GL catches them at it in the kitchen, and boy were his, Plastic Man and Flash's reactions hilarious. And Nightwing was mooing away at the thought of "bumping uglies with Wonder woman!" Ah, Nightwing... The hapless protege with GQ model looks.
Can't wait until your next update. ^_^
Umm... I just got one small problem: I couldn't help but LOL when Batman said "baby". It's quite OOC for him, but I wonder if perhaps he was trying to get into the character of the rapist? IMHO, "Princess" is almost like a petname for Diana for him. Hearing Batsy say "baby"likelike hearing Diana say "dude". XD
That aside, I think the new plot development is fantastic. And he wants her to move in!!! Okay, I can understand the rationale behind it (besides J'onn would be getting all those "nice dreams" from Diana from now on), but still!!
Oh yeah, I would like to see how the rest of the JLA reacts to the news of Diana's rape. So far, I've seen Clark's and J'onn's. I remember this fic where GL catches them at it in the kitchen, and boy were his, Plastic Man and Flash's reactions hilarious. And Nightwing was mooing away at the thought of "bumping uglies with Wonder woman!" Ah, Nightwing... The hapless protege with GQ model looks.
Can't wait until your next update. ^_^
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December 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
What can I say, except this was an AWESOME chapter... And that initial part where Batman was doing the kneeling thing and that thing to Wondy's thigh reminded me of that scene iketiketeia, ya know, when he made the plea. Man, this (and that) is so frickin' hot.
And woohoo! Plot!
And woohoo! Plot!
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December 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
holy fuck. . . I'm just speechless. . .
um, more please?
um, more please?
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November 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow its co alo along great so far. Really good story and hope u update soon.
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November 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yea!!! We get more! :)
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November 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Amazing story. Very true to character, and despite oft oft-used subject matter in a WW fic, very different from the norm. It's realistic despite the fact that we're talking about metahumans here. I like the inclusion of Superman as her best friend. Please update soon!
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November 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hey,
this coming along real nice. this chapter was really well done, and i enjoyed it, I like how you are keeping character with Diana, and not just making her act like everything is ok, but you are protraying as an actual victom of rape would more or less act. alot of people who do rape based stories dont do that. I like how you are developing the tension between her and batman, and i would have thought that you would have gone so far as to make Bruce leave the JLA so that Diana would feel better and not so afraid and have him do it also becuase he cares. I cant wait for the next instalment, and by all means let me know if you need any idea's or help with concept. Keep up the good work.
~~~~~Bunny
this coming along real nice. this chapter was really well done, and i enjoyed it, I like how you are keeping character with Diana, and not just making her act like everything is ok, but you are protraying as an actual victom of rape would more or less act. alot of people who do rape based stories dont do that. I like how you are developing the tension between her and batman, and i would have thought that you would have gone so far as to make Bruce leave the JLA so that Diana would feel better and not so afraid and have him do it also becuase he cares. I cant wait for the next instalment, and by all means let me know if you need any idea's or help with concept. Keep up the good work.
~~~~~Bunny
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November 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
omg that was soo intense and damn good writing..I dont visit this part of the site, actually my first time and the first story Ive read, you have wonderfull writing ability and great detail, the emotions and everything..It is a sad and dark fic but I must say that I truelly do love it and if it wouldnt be to much trouble could you email with the next update? my email is ^^^ there..lol..anyhow if not I will check back in time to see if anymore have been posted, again great writing..:-) Mija