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October 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh man. I hope you continue with this soon. It's so good.
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October 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
great love it
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October 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Really good story!!!! You have to continue!!!!!!!!!!
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September 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow usually i hate stories that have to do w/ rape, but this is really good. I hope u continue.
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September 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
you better make the next chapter!!^^
its wierd to find WW in such state..course im used to her being
super strong and all...but it was brilliant! making her "human"
like bruce...
i like the way you write...no gramatic errors..clean,
absorbing- perfect.^^
please do continue
...im hanging!^^
its wierd to find WW in such state..course im used to her being
super strong and all...but it was brilliant! making her "human"
like bruce...
i like the way you write...no gramatic errors..clean,
absorbing- perfect.^^
please do continue
...im hanging!^^
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September 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wow...nice story...its kinda rare to find a fic concerning this two that has a GOOD plot..^^
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September 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I'm still astonished by how good this fic is. I've seen so many rape fics that are trully awful but this one is so well written I'm on the edge of my seat. Please continue.
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August 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I have to admit I've never cared for the rape fics, but this was exceedingly well-written. I think you did very well with the tone of the piece. I found your writing very sensual but equally disturbing. I'm with Artemis - I'm ready for WW to get her hands on this f***er, and to let Batman introduce her to the joys of consensual pleasure.
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August 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
As disturbing and uncomfortable this is to read, I commend you on taking this risk. Your writing is excellent and it definitely stirred an emotional response in this reader. I can't wait for Diana to find this *bleep* and beat the crap out of him. Please write more soon, I don't want to be left with that image and I really want to see where this goes.
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January 5, 1920 at 12:00 AM
The last chapter was exceptionally done. Batman's idea of therapy was very effective! :)
I cried at the sweatness of the gift Batman gave. And you've captured his character very well as well as the actions he chose. This is one of the best scenes I have ever read. You are truly gifted. Please continue! Can't wait for more.
I cried at the sweatness of the gift Batman gave. And you've captured his character very well as well as the actions he chose. This is one of the best scenes I have ever read. You are truly gifted. Please continue! Can't wait for more.