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February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very cute.
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January 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Emo writer much eh? XD
So awesome.
I liked how it started out alot, but it felt like you gave up part way through it.
Honestly, I lauhged out loud at your antiques of "most horrible writer, only one more torturous chapter to go, and PLEASE FLAME ME" ect...
Honestly you started off great I thought, try not to lose heart while working at it, we all have to start somewhere and without practice there can be no improvement.
It was enjoyable to read, hope you don't give up on writing!
~Alisha
So awesome.
I liked how it started out alot, but it felt like you gave up part way through it.
Honestly, I lauhged out loud at your antiques of "most horrible writer, only one more torturous chapter to go, and PLEASE FLAME ME" ect...
Honestly you started off great I thought, try not to lose heart while working at it, we all have to start somewhere and without practice there can be no improvement.
It was enjoyable to read, hope you don't give up on writing!
~Alisha
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February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nasty!
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October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heeheehee, I'm sorry, the ending was really funny!
You are a wonderful writer.
Do romance novels, you’d make it to the top on your first book!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
You are a wonderful writer.
Do romance novels, you’d make it to the top on your first book!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Crappy ending much? Oh well lol
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September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm not bad. There could have been more added (*coughcough*sexscene*coughcough*). A few minor typos no biggie. It's just missing something *coughcough*lemon*coughcough*. :P Anyway, hope to see more BB M/M from you in the future.
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September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn it! You NEED to do a follow up for the sex scene! It is imperitive! We need it! Why didn't you give it to us?! Sex! Sex! Sex!
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August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It wasn?t as bad as you said in fact it was quite good, don?t be so critical with yourself. Anyway update soon I cant wait to know what those guys did to my Terry =P
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August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey man, I like it. Don't diss yourself like that. Tense, fast-paced... does it HAVE to end??
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August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey. That was really good. I can't wait until you update!