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person Jerky Chid
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Truly amazing. It's just fantastic!
person Robin Holmes
schedule September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Every time I read this story, I find something else to be amazed by. This story has a perfect mix of violence, love, romance, and that little bit of well done sex. One of my favorites on AFF. Keep up the damn good work
person robin
schedule June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This wins
person capcomfreak4life
schedule May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awesome fic, yo.
keep writing.
person ahriman {don't want to log in}
schedule April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love the story and so have them kick this bitch's ass and I feel sorry for the new Red X you left him out.
person Kale
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YEY!!! new chapter!!!... next please *burp* ^_^
person LoveGuardian
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ha! Did I not say that letting the beast out would restore Garlo's powers? And just at the right time, too. I like the beast part of him as much as I like the serious side. And the goofy side that we need to see a little more of. But he's your character, so it's your choice. The fight was cool. Too bad that they got away.. for now. MUAHAHA... umm, don't mind me... it's late and I'm grounded from the computer, but I'm on anyways... SHH!! Anyways, the part where Garlo marked Raven was interesting. He's really come full circle, hasn't he? Good for him.

When you say stay tuned for the sequel, you mean after this story is done, right? The wording was weird, I guess. Sequels are fun. Ok, enough from the crazy girl who doesn't sleep when she should. Update soon!! Many hugs and kisses!
person Kale
schedule March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YOU EVIL BASTARD OF A COUSIN OF MINE!!! how dare you send me a story that aint done >_< finish another chapter soon!! and let me know when its done too!!
person Livia
schedule March 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter, i like this story, it rox the house. UPDATE SOON!
person catt
schedule March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit....uhh....goodbye red x and star. YOU JERKS!!! Poor raven,whimpers. I hope this turns out a happy ending. UPDATE SOON!!!