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Aww, Garlo is actually starting to soften up a little. Saying "I could love you" is just the same as saying that he does. Now they just need to escape. Which is probably taken care of by the misunderstood and awesome beast that lives inside of Garlo. I have a theory that the beast that Garlo hasn't let out in years is the key to restoring his changling abilities. But it's just a theory. Side note: The whole wings conversation was funny. And we got to see a bit of Beast Boy. Our dimension Beast Boy, that is. Update quickly! Every chapter I read only makes me want to read more. You are evil for always leaving us with cliffhangers.

Oh wow, evil rav rip out terra's heart. GOOD GOING!!!! LOL!!! Seriously Loved the chappie. I hope everything works out for them though....UPDATE!!

So Queen Raven didn't even recognize her own self. Not that she would have any reason to. Grr, I hate evil bitches... usually I like Terra, but not when she betrays everyone. Wait... wasn't she the reason for Raven's insanity in the first place? Ah well. So now Raven has her kick ass wings. All she has to do is get out of her chains and wreak vengance on her evil twin. And Garlo has to figure out how to change into more than one animal, because I know that he could if he really wanted to. Ok, that's enough from me. Awesome chapter, as always.

I've read this all the way through, and screamed viscious curses at my computer when I realized there was no more to read. I am very, very impressed with this story. The plot makes excellent use of information from both the Teen Titans comics and the cartoon - the blending was seamless and only a hyperactive fanatic with a lot of time would be able to identify the individual sources. The manner in which you had Raven's powers transport her to this alternate timeline - at the same time losing her powers as she knew them - was extremely creative. Keeping Terra as the ultimate treacherous bitch appealed strongly to me, and fit perfectly into the direction the story was taking. Having Robin and Starfire both serving under the Supreme Leader was a nice twist to warp the 'they can do no evil' thoughts of those who feel that way. While I am disappointed that Cyborg is 'dead,' I do admire the creativity displayed in the manner that was used to keep him around. Now, for the two main characters (as of yet, at least). Raven/Raleen was well-crafted - the meetings with her emotions, and her ability to express them more fully (with a perfectly explained, very probable reason) gave the character a touch of your own personality without making her too different from the 'normal.' By far, Garlo is the absolute best characterization I have ever seen of Beast Boy. Far from the pathetic, weak, stupid, annoying boy that he is so often portrayed, this Beast Boy is in touch with his animal self, and a man in all senses of the word. You have given him depth that most 'real' people will never have - by balancing confidence, melancholy, guilt, rage, and the battle with his 'darker' side, you have made this character more real and more human than people that I see every day. Again, I am highly impressed, and strongly encourage more writing from you.

You updated on my birthday! Yay for presents! Anyways, good chapter. I was confused at first, until I realized that Garlo dying was a dream. I'm glad that Garlo knows now that Raleen is really Raven. They are very daring to try to kill Queen Raven. Is this story going to end soon? I don't want it to, but it seems to have that feel to it. Update soon! Have a good day!

OH MY GOD!!! He know's!!!finally but still, oh my gosh, what's gonna happen to them?!?! UPDATE PLEASE!!!!

Wow, what a great story. Can't wait to see where you'll go with it.

Awesome fic...write more, please! :)

Nice chapter, direct and to the point. Thanks for the lemon, we were needing substenance. I see the mystery of Queen Raven grows synister. What of Terra?

Oh and one thing, the whole "something bad was going to happen" thing...BAD GARLO! BAD BAD GARLO!
talk about a heartless cliffhanger.

Now back to your cave and don't come out until you are sorry...or have the next installment or two ready.

OOOOOOOOOO ME LIKEY!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE!!!!