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September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The Starfire chapter was quite interesting.That being the second chapter and all?
I look forward too seeing more on this.
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BrianDarksoul~
I look forward too seeing more on this.
The Dark One
BrianDarksoul~
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September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww, you should make Cyborg suck it up go out with Beast Boy, being friends is boring. ;)
But this is cute. I like it so far.
But this is cute. I like it so far.
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September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yup, you got Starfire's personality right. Just like you nailed Cy's in the last chapter. I would have liked this chapter to be a little longer, but it's good as is.
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September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm this first chapter is quite intruiging.
I look forward to seeing how this develops Then again I am a bias bastard BB/Raven/(Whomever the other lucky guy/girl is) person
Hell if Robin can be a chronic turncoat(Red X) and then be holier than thou prick in the series then ANYTHING is possible.
Just no BB/Rae/Aqualad crap *Gags*
And NO BB/Terra either. Trying t KILL you and your freinds PROVES that the person NEVER really loved you anyway!
I look forward to seeing how this develops Then again I am a bias bastard BB/Raven/(Whomever the other lucky guy/girl is) person
Hell if Robin can be a chronic turncoat(Red X) and then be holier than thou prick in the series then ANYTHING is possible.
Just no BB/Rae/Aqualad crap *Gags*
And NO BB/Terra either. Trying t KILL you and your freinds PROVES that the person NEVER really loved you anyway!
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September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked this. I really hope your going to do follow ups where you tell everyone else. I thought you kept very much in character and I really appreciate that since I'm not fond of OOCness. This was well written and nicely-paced. Keep up the good work!