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by elegyenigma

person Doc
schedule February 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
another well written piece! a lot of your work has little sex i was starting to think you couldnt write it but the way you painted mental pictures with your words was remarkable. also i thought it was clever how you named the character Elegy which is a play on you own name LG is it not? keep it up another sensation story from enigma!
person raptor
schedule December 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just read through this story and thought it was great. I would really like to see Enigma take more control over the two girls.
person anon
schedule December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
try to keep the words you use in your story a little more subtle than youve got an exellent body and other flattery to your OC