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Wow this story was really hot! I have a thing for Venom so you KNOW I had to take a gander at this story. God DAMN it was good.

i'd just like to say that i have been reading this for a while now, and love it. i wonder if Venom misses her...
well, update soon and i love what you have done so far.
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Wow! That was a great story. Amazingly sexy. And I liked how you kept everyone pretty close to as-in character as possible so the story didn't feel like it was just people with the same looks and names acting out in a porno or something. I hope you continue to write more. You did a great job.

Great writing, even though I'm not a huge fan of MJ/Peter. I know someone else requested it so *shrug* I look forward to whatever you post next, and I guess my penguins and I can be patient.

Okay, I'm lazy and the last chapter is a bookended version of "Happy... Tiger". I think it works either way but then again I don't read 'em. Enjoy!

Yikes. Just yikes.

Its not that the writing is bad superbang. Its really very good and very erotic. I'm just disturbed by Venom's rape of Mary Jane and Silver Sable's rape of Spidey. What's worse is how willing MJ was over it and even enjoyed it.

But yeah, I think it'd be really awesome if you could just do a straight Mary Jane/Peter(Spidey) pairing and sort of...not acknowledge this one. I think reading this, your brief references to Peter/MJ is what had me interested and salivating the most. So if you do any more stuff...I think that'd be awesome if you just gave Peter/MJ a try. For one thing there's not NEARLY enough of it out there.

But great job with this despite my differences with the content.

OMG! That was amazing! Eeee, Venom is s-ex-y! *giggle* So what happened? Did the symbiote bond to MJ? What's going to happen at Oscorp? Norman's kinda sexy, too... *ish a super-villain groupy* Anyway, if this is the end, you must write sequel now. My penguin army commands it! Five stars, and kudos.

Great Ending! I like how the story is finite, but open for more.

You know based off this fanfic, I'd much rather see what you could do with Peter and Mary Jane rather than Peter and Venom. I'm somewhat disturbed with how easily Mary Jane gives in sexually to Eddie Brock/Venom even if its to save her husband. She says it feels like cheating...well uh...it was cheating.

And it looks like Silver Sable wants some action with Silver Sable...hey wouldn't mind seeing that, especially after Mary Jane cheated on him.

My review got erased before.
She thinks he's repulsive? I think Venom's hot. Of course, I also have a thing for demon hentai. Anyway, I can't wait to see the rest of this. Updated soon, please!